Write an English song using this:
Why do I have to keep guessing and be happy / unhappy on everything about what you do? Because I'm silly; crazily in love with you.
Challenge given: 03 Nov 09
Challenge accepted: 18 Jan 10
Written 1st draft on: 18 Jan 10 (Totally did not listen to lecturer in class today -_-"')
Two bus stops away from your home,
I called, wake you from missing your stop.
We chatted till you're back in the house,
before I left for some warm coffee shop.
I let you cry on my shoulders,
Made silly gifts for your birthdays.
We IM like insomniacs all through the night,
be there solely for your sake.
You are like a drug to me, affecting my control, changing my needs
Why couldn't there be a forecast to your ups and downs,
Wanna be ready with a shoulder or a much needed hug.
Because unlike him, that is all I can offer, for you.
It is not my position, much as I want to change,
Why are you my weakness? Because, I am silly;
crazily in love with you.
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Comments: I can't think of the real English word for 罩门 so I used weakness. And the very cliche --> You are like a drug to me... Just goes to show I am not good at writing English songs?
Why do I have to keep guessing and be happy / unhappy on everything about what you do? Because I'm silly; crazily in love with you.
Challenge given: 03 Nov 09
Challenge accepted: 18 Jan 10
Written 1st draft on: 18 Jan 10 (Totally did not listen to lecturer in class today -_-"')
Two bus stops away from your home,
I called, wake you from missing your stop.
We chatted till you're back in the house,
before I left for some warm coffee shop.
I let you cry on my shoulders,
Made silly gifts for your birthdays.
We IM like insomniacs all through the night,
be there solely for your sake.
You are like a drug to me, affecting my control, changing my needs
Why couldn't there be a forecast to your ups and downs,
Wanna be ready with a shoulder or a much needed hug.
Because unlike him, that is all I can offer, for you.
It is not my position, much as I want to change,
Why are you my weakness? Because, I am silly;
crazily in love with you.
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Comments: I can't think of the real English word for 罩门 so I used weakness. And the very cliche --> You are like a drug to me... Just goes to show I am not good at writing English songs?
If I din remember wrongly... I din specify chinese or english song. Oh wells....
ReplyDeletewell, you didn't specify it to be in Chinese so it can only be in English right? Unless you want me to write in Malay!?! Or even Jap or Kor???
ReplyDeletenah, im just responding to your first line "Write an English using this"
ReplyDeleteO.o then want me take off? Anyway, what is your feel on my comment? "I can't think of the real English word for 罩门 so I used weakness. And the very cliche --> You are like a drug to me... "
ReplyDeleteLOL, i dun even know wat the chinese word mean.
ReplyDeleteUh well, there are more cliche lyrics out there that sell, so nothing is too cliche.... er. know what i mean?
as long as it sells huh...
ReplyDeleteThis seems like a poem more than a song. All your English ones are very drama ^^;
ReplyDeletewhere got drama...
ReplyDeleteDrama is every where... You're one drama mama
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